Sarah offers the FIRST TEN FEEDBACK coaching service to give a helping hand to aspiring writers on a limited basis as time permits. This consists of:

  • Feedback on the first ten pages only of any unpublished manuscript of long form fiction (ie. novel)
  • Feedback will cover:
    • Highlighting well-crafted segments so you know what parts of your writing are working well and why
    • Drawing your attention to areas that aren’t working well
    • Suggestions for improvement
    • May include comments on all areas of the writing craft including story, pace, character development, dialogue, structure

The cost is $30 (AUD).

To request FIRST TEN FEEDBACK from Sarah complete the contact form below and use the message section to:

  • Pitch your manuscript in less than 100 words
  • Provide a brief background about yourself in less than 100 words
  • Do not insert your manuscript

If you don’t hear back from Sarah within three weeks of the request then it means she has a full coaching load and is not accepting further requests. She sends her sincere apologies that she is unable to assist.

For FIRST TEN FEEDBACK contact Sarah